Approaching Literature6. “ ‘Out, Out —,’ ” by Robert Frost
There are many specific
strategies to approaching a literary text and writing about
it. Some of these strategies
we’ll discuss in detail in the next three chapters; others,
your teachers will recommend. We
want to start, though, by suggesting a straightforward three-step approach that
will give you a way into any written text: experience, analysis,
and extension.
Let’s try these steps with the
following poem, “ ‘Out, Out —,’ ” by Robert Frost.
The buzz-saw snarled and rattled
in the yard
And made dust and dropped
stove-length sticks of wood,
Sweet-scented stuff when the
breeze drew across it.
And from there those that lifted
eyes could count
Five mountain ranges one behind
the other 5
Under the sunset far into
Vermont.
And the saw snarled and rattled,
snarled and rattled,
As it ran light, or had to bear a
load.
And nothing happened: day was all
but done.
Call it a day, I wish they might
have said 10
To please the boy by giving him
the half hour
That a boy counts so much when
saved from work.
His sister stood beside them in
her apron
To tell them “Supper.” At the
word, the saw,
As if to prove saws knew what
supper meant, 15
Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or
seemed to leap —
He must have given the hand.
However it was,
Neither refused the meeting. But
the hand!
The boy’s first outcry was a
rueful laugh,
As he swung toward them holding
up the hand 20
Half in appeal, but half as if to
keep
The life from spilling. Then the
boy saw all —
Since he was old enough to know,
big boy
Doing a man’s work, though a
child at heart —
He saw all spoiled. “Don’t let
him cut my hand off — 25
The doctor, when he comes. Don’t
let him, sister!”
So. But the hand was gone
already.
The doctor put him in the dark of
ether.
He lay and puffed his lips out
with his breath.
And then — the watcher at his
pulse took fright. 30
No one believed. They listened at
his heart.
Little — less — nothing! — and
that ended it.
No more to build on there. And
they, since they
Were not the one dead, turned to
their affairs.
[1916]
Experience
When we experience literature, we
respond to it subjectively, personally, emotionally.
This poem presents a fairly
grisly scene: A boy is at work cutting wood, the saw slips,
and he cuts his hand. Despite the
doctor’s efforts, the boy dies. Then everyone goes back to work — end of story.
You might find this a distasteful scene, you might find
it sad, you might think that the
people in the poem are heartless and cold, it might
remind you of something you read
about or even experienced. Maybe you came away
thinking that most people aren’t
really as callous as the ones in this poem. If you live in
the city, you might feel removed
from the rural Vermont setting; if you’ve spent time on
a farm, the poem might have a
more familiar ring to it. Any or all of these responses are
perfectly legitimate; in fact, at
this early stage, there truly are no wrong answers, or any
answers at all. Even at this
first step, however, you cannot help but notice the language
and details — such as the pretty
sunset next to the sound of the buzz saw or the fact that
the boy appeals to his sister
while the parents are absent from the scene.
Analysis
But you’re just getting started.
You might think that you haven’t done very productive
work by merely responding, but
you have: you’ve entered the world of the poem. The
next step is to move from feeling
to thinking — to analyze the work. Here’s where you
begin to ask questions, to think
about the way language is used, to draw inferences.
The key is observation: no detail
is unimportant, so notice, notice, notice. In the next
chapters, we’ll talk more about
what to look for, and give you strategies for paying
close attention to the work. For
now, we’ll keep it simple. What do you notice about
the language and structure of
this poem? What connections or patterns emerge?
What inferences might you draw
from those connections? If you notice something
unusual, something that stands
out from the rest of the poem, you probably want
to ask why. At this stage, you’re
basically reading between the lines as you consider
what is directly expressed along
with what is indirectly expressed through figurative
language (language that’s not
literal) and other poetic techniques.
In the first line of “ ‘Out, Out
— ’ ” you probably noted that the buzz saw is depicted
as an animal that “snarled and
rattled,” a description repeated three times before the
saw “leaped out at the boy’s
hand, or seemed to leap” (l. 16). This personification
suggests that this wasn’t an
accident; the saw is a predator that intended to hurt the
boy. Frost then gives us a
description of the natural beauty of the landscape, the “five
mountain ranges one behind the
other / under the sunset far into Vermont” (ll. 5–6).
Why would Frost turn a saw into a
vicious animal and then show us the beautiful
Vermont countryside? Maybe he’s
saying that nature has two sides, violent and
peaceful, predatory and
nourishing? What do you think?
Notice that the poem is told from
the third-person point of view, except in line 10,
when the speaker comments that he
wishes they would have “Call[ed] it a day” and
given the boy a half hour away
from his work. Why shift perspective here? Perhaps
it was Frost’s way of
anticipating the accident to come. Maybe lines 10–12 are put in
there to give the poem a bit of
soul, to express some regret, to temper the cold practicality
of the final lines. Perhaps you
have another interpretation of this choice.
Titles can be a clue to larger
issues in a poem, and the quotation marks that
surround this one signal that
it’s taken from another source. The phrase “Out, out”
is from act V, scene v, of
Shakespeare’s tragedy Macbeth. The exact lines are:
Out, out, brief candle!
Life’s but a walking shadow, a
poor player
That struts and frets his hour
upon the stage
And then is heard no more. It is
a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound
and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Macbeth himself utters this
speech at the end of the play after being informed
of Lady Macbeth’s death,
recognizing the brevity of life and the futility of all his
worldly ambitions. You might ask
why Frost would connect this rural scene with a
Shakespearean tragedy. Is
Frost saying that death is tragic? Is it a reminder that life
is fleeting? Is it a recognition
that the forces of nature (those “mountain ranges one
behind the other / Under the
sunset”) are uncaring, indifferent to human beings? Is
the speaker denouncing those who
“were not the one dead” for their lack of feeling,
acknowledging the necessity to
carry on — or perhaps both? Is Frost arguing for a
carpe diem (seize the day) belief system, in
which the best we can do is appreciate the
mountains and sunset because
anything can happen? The answers to such analytical
questions will lead to your
interpretation of the poem.
Extension
At this point, you have analyzed
a text and drawn inferences to arrive at an interpretation.
For many assignments, that’s all
you will need to do. But sometimes you’ll be
asked to extend your
interpretation from the world of the poem to the real world.
This type of extension may
involve examination of the background of the author,
research into the historical
context of the work, or application of the ideas in the
piece to life in general.
For instance, biographical
research on Frost and “ ‘Out, Out — ’ ” reveals that
Frost based the poem on an actual
incident in 1915, when his neighbor’s son lost his
hand to a buzz saw. The boy went
into shock from blood loss, and the efforts of the
physician called to the scene
could not save him. Obviously, Frost did not write the
poem to report this specific
incident, but he must have seen something in it that had
meaning beyond the actual event.
The poem might be seen as his way of immortalizing
the boy and thus giving his young
life meaning. Or perhaps Frost — who was
over forty at the time the poem
was written — was recognizing his own mortality and
reflecting on the fleeting nature
of all human life.
If you research the time period
when this poem was written, you’ll find that
young children often worked long
hours in unsafe conditions to help support their
families. Child labor laws
adopted in 1924 ended this practice. Using this information,
you might build the case that
Frost was making a political statement by illustrating
the dangers of expecting a boy,
“a child at heart,” to do “a man’s work.” Also, the
poem offers an entrance into
understanding the social conditions of this time period,
when everyone in the family had
to contribute in order to survive. When the boy
“saw all spoiled,” he may have
been thinking of the hardship of losing a hand, but he may also have been
thinking that his loss of productivity would be a real hardship for
a family struggling to make it in
the face of harsh economic realities.
The poem also asks how we should
grieve. Is the best way to honor the dead
to return to the activities of
the living? In an extension paper you might argue that
getting right back to work
instead of grieving is an economic reality of the working
class, regardless of time and
place. You might also consider the language of the poem
as a way to extend its meaning.
Frost’s personification of the predatory saw within the
idyllic natural beauty could be
read as the intrusion of the machine into the garden,
the negative or dangerous impact
of technology (or, in Frost’s day, mechanization)
on the unspoiled beauty of
nature. Can the two coexist? If you pursue this line of
thinking, imagine how you might
tie it to earlier works of American literature or to
contemporary warnings of the
dangers of technology on the natural world.
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